One of my problems with this is the neck.
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There's just something about it... too thick? I guess I can't see where it ends or something..? EITHER WAY SOMETHING HAS TO BE DONE! MAYBE! Possibly..?

My second problem is that there's a tiny bit of building not on the ground... Very little problem but the more you stare at it the more you go like "AAAAAAAAAARGH THERE JUST NEEDS TO BE ONE LITTLE PATCH OF GROUND!" Yeah, the left building, leftmost corner.

Maybe there should be a hint of shadow underneath him but that doesn't really matter. The sky is really cool, I loved how you did the lineart, and the background isn't too bad for a first time, and yeah. So, minor problems, all in all, still pretty good.

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The bottom half of Agito (hips down) look painful to draw. I think the legs may be too thin and short, but it could just be me.
The background looks nice though. =]

the background is amazing.

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<sub>I'm not sure I see anything wrong with the neck. @___@;;; Redline please...? Or something. >.<;;

Ooooh, I didn't notice. Doing the background at 2 AM on low magnification probably wasn't a very good idea on my part. xD I'll try to fix it.

OH MAN, shadow. OTL I fail. Thanks for the critique, I will fix and update this picture.</sub>

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<sub>Only the shoes were a major pain to draw. The rest was fine. @_@;;

I think you're right about the thin legs thing, I will fix it. I don't know if I can do anything about it being too short, though. ;>_>

Haha, thanks. (:</sub>

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I dunno... it just looks kinda thick, even if he's looking down... A line a bit after the point where it meets the neck shirt thing..?

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I WAS SLIGHTLY HELPFUL! 8D
Have fun with that. Don't draw that early! Soon, it'll get worse and worse... and then after a month doing that, while you're drawing, you'll start drawing ears everywhere or something! XD

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